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  1. Data Management
  2. DM-17118

Complete Milestone LDM-503-08b

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    • Resolution: Done
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          lguy Leanne Guy added a comment -

          Looks good!

          Given that the title of the document is "CCOB Data Access", but that section 5 states that there is no CCOB or DBB in this test, and section 4.3 states that it is recommended that there should be many more iterations of this test and with much more automation, it would be useful to state this in either the abstract or introduction, with a timeline for the next iterations with more automation.

          Some minor comments:

          1.3 System Overview

          • spectragraph -> spectrograph

          4.1 Summary (and duplicated in 5.1.3.1)

          • "but for the time being of this test, the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench, but was approved by data management leadership team " => "but at the time of this test the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench. This test configuration was approved by data management leadership team"
          • I don't understand this sentence: "The DBB software is for data tracking and oracle DB which this test doesn’t include at this point.'

          5.1.3.1

          • "A image file" => "An image file"
          • "AT-archiverin a" => " AT-archiver in a"
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          lguy Leanne Guy added a comment - Looks good! Given that the title of the document is "CCOB Data Access", but that section 5 states that there is no CCOB or DBB in this test, and section 4.3 states that it is recommended that there should be many more iterations of this test and with much more automation, it would be useful to state this in either the abstract or introduction, with a timeline for the next iterations with more automation. Some minor comments: 1.3 System Overview spectragraph -> spectrograph 4.1 Summary (and duplicated in 5.1.3.1) "but for the time being of this test, the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench, but was approved by data management leadership team " => "but at the time of this test the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench. This test configuration was approved by data management leadership team" I don't understand this sentence: "The DBB software is for data tracking and oracle DB which this test doesn’t include at this point.' 5.1.3.1 "A image file" => "An image file" "AT-archiverin a" => " AT-archiver in a"
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          lguy Leanne Guy added a comment -

          Small mods only, I do not need to re-review.

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          lguy Leanne Guy added a comment - Small mods only, I do not need to re-review.
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          womullan Wil O'Mullane added a comment -

          thanks for getting this done

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          womullan Wil O'Mullane added a comment - thanks for getting this done
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          mbutler Michelle Butler [X] (Inactive) added a comment -

          Thanks Leanne!!!  I made all those changes Gabriele Comoretto [X]... can we generate final versions?   

           

          thanks!

          Michelle .  

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          mbutler Michelle Butler [X] (Inactive) added a comment - Thanks Leanne!!!  I made all those changes Gabriele Comoretto [X] ... can we generate final versions?      thanks! Michelle .  
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          gcomoretto Gabriele Comoretto [X] (Inactive) added a comment -

          Reissuing the document, directly from master.

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          gcomoretto Gabriele Comoretto [X] (Inactive) added a comment - Reissuing the document, directly from master.

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            mbutler Michelle Butler [X] (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            swinbank John Swinbank
            Reviewers:
            Wil O'Mullane
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            Gabriele Comoretto [X] (Inactive), John Swinbank, Leanne Guy, Michelle Butler [X] (Inactive), Wil O'Mullane
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