Given that the title of the document is "CCOB Data Access", but that section 5 states that there is no CCOB or DBB in this test, and section 4.3 states that it is recommended that there should be many more iterations of this test and with much more automation, it would be useful to state this in either the abstract or introduction, with a timeline for the next iterations with more automation.
Some minor comments:
1.3 System Overview
- spectragraph -> spectrograph
4.1 Summary (and duplicated in 18.104.22.168)
- "but for the time being of this test, the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench, but was approved by data management leadership team " => "but at the time of this test the AuxTel was not connected to an optical bench. This test configuration was approved by data management leadership team"
- I don't understand this sentence: "The DBB software is for data tracking and oracle DB which this test doesn’t include at this point.'
- "A image file" => "An image file"
- "AT-archiverin a" => " AT-archiver in a"