Excellent, thank you both Simon Krughoff and Michael Wood-Vasey. I agree with all these suggestions and have incorporated them all into the DMTN (paraphrased in the list below).
The draft is now an official DMTN at https://dmtn-151.lsst.io/, and I'm about to initiate the RFC where we can discuss further. Definitely open to more feedback.
KSK: Section 3.5: galaxy's redshifts --> galaxy's redshift
MLG: fixed!
KSK: First para Section 4.1: missing parens at the end of the sentence.
MLG: closing parenthesis fixed
KSK: "potentialHost" and "potentialHostSepDist" might be better names than "nearbyPotHost" and "nearbyPotHostSepDist"
MWV: further revise suggestion to "potentialHost" and "potentialHostSeparation" to remove the term 'distance' which could evoke a strict definition
MLG: agree with both, went with the latter
KSK: calculating separation distance for nearest 10 extended sources is probably too small a number
MWV: instead of calculating separations for the N nearest extended sources, use healpix
MLG: agreed. updated to specify a separation distance must be calculated for all extended sources within ~200 arcsec before the top 3 are identified (Appendix B motivates this in depth); added a note to say HEALpix could be used to identify these extended sources, but that it is an implementation detail
MWV: (would require a scope increase) Messier galaxies and brighter NGC galaxies won't be in the LSST catalog, but their coordinates and second moments could be imported and included in the potential host association process
MLG: added a note about this
MWV: see the technical implemented details of how to store and use l_{xx,xy,yy} in the Object Table in DM-19519
MLG: added a statement to the end of Appendix A about how the reference frame of Ixx Iyy Ixy should be verified at the time of implementation
MLG: Reorganized Section 4.1 "Recommendations".
MLG: Extended the draft RFC.
A draft DMTN that describes a method to improve the association between DIAObjects and Objects (for non-stellar Objects), and proposes adding two new DIAObject elements to hold the Object ids and "separation distances" for these associated Objects, currently lives here:
https://github.com/MelissaGraham/dmtn-alertoptions/blob/master/draft-hostassoc.pdf
This document is ready for review and, if found to be adequate, the associated RFC draft (Section 4.1) could be shared first with the DM-SST and then posted for broader input.
Leanne Guy I'd like to get this on a DM-SST agenda, probably after the Algorithms Workshop?