The reference in the abstract to the previous release's CMR is not rendering: " can be found in [ ? ]"
Figure 1: The “regression” ... This isn't strictly speaking a regression but rather a difference in performance between 2 algorithms, jointcal and FGCM. I'd say: "The degraded performance in the photometry metrics after late June was due to the introduction of a new
photometric calibration method known as FGCM, replacing Jointcal.
Figure11 : "... The metrics have continued to improve since the introduction of FGCM, but are still worse than previous results using jointcal"
Section 2: Dashboard summary of performance metrics – I would rename this section just "Summary of performance metrics" and provide a summary of notable metrics or changes, not just those for which we have a dashboard plot. The point is to summarize the performance for this releaser, not the dashboard. E.g. AM2: r and AF2: z show and ~ 20% improvement. What changed? Do keep the dashboard plot, it's very useful, just don't limit the summary discussion to those metrics in the dashboard.
Leanne Guy
added a comment - A few comments:
The reference in the abstract to the previous release's CMR is not rendering: " can be found in [ ? ]"
Figure 1: The “regression” ... This isn't strictly speaking a regression but rather a difference in performance between 2 algorithms, jointcal and FGCM. I'd say: "The degraded performance in the photometry metrics after late June was due to the introduction of a new
photometric calibration method known as FGCM, replacing Jointcal.
Figure11 : "... The metrics have continued to improve since the introduction of FGCM, but are still worse than previous results using jointcal "
Section 2: Dashboard summary of performance metrics – I would rename this section just "Summary of performance metrics" and provide a summary of notable metrics or changes, not just those for which we have a dashboard plot. The point is to summarize the performance for this releaser, not the dashboard. E.g. AM2: r and AF2: z show and ~ 20% improvement. What changed? Do keep the dashboard plot, it's very useful, just don't limit the summary discussion to those metrics in the dashboard.
I have created in Docushare the DMTR-281 placeholder for this characterization report