Cloned DMTN repository.

Just to make sure I'm reviewing the right thing — the text is what currently appears at https://dmtn-031.lsst.io, right? (It's marked as “Latest Revision: 2018-02-21”, but I think that's just because the machinery needs some adjustment.)

I would say just look at the rst on github. I didn't even know the io page was updating at all let alone when it will update after pushing the latest version.

https://dmtn-031.lsst.io/v/index.html indicates it was updated today.

The copyright needs updating (it says 2016).

Since there wasn't a outstanding PR, I've made a bunch of tweaks to the text and added a series of comments (as “notes”). These are now available on this PR against master.

Please do read the PR and take my formatting/typo/copy-editing fixes as suggestions rather than requirements! The things in “note” blocks are what I'd really like you to address.

Overall, this is very nice, though. I've made a few suggestions for clarification of the wording, but the material seems comprehensive and well thought through. I like it!

Thanks for your responses to my comments!

I am now happy with almost everything. There are two comments outstanding which I'm still not clear about — could you take a look? (I think maybe you already explained one to me in person, but I can't reconstruct it from the text, which I think means the text still needs a bit of tweaking).

Apart from those two, you should probably cast an eye over my edits at https://github.com/lsst-dm/dmtn-031/pull/1/commits/ea1c5e759a12263612139c7001f922c9958a503b just to make sure that none of my editing altered your meaning or introduced any errors.

Then I think we're good to go...

Merged u/swinbank/edit edit's into main text.