Since all the versions say "August 9", it's a little difficult to figure out which is which I believe I was reading the one from DocuShare.
I'm saying that LSE-279 specifies a central authentication system, currently implemented by CILogon, including authentication for Chilean astronomers, specifically including the COFRe federation. I believe that our AAIM system does not currently anticipate different authentication integrations/federations for different locations.
- After "In addition see Section 2.3", add "There will be additional computing capacity to support requirements for the Data Access services and the Portal."
- Change "The raw data" to "The raw data and data products". (The comma should also be a semicolon.)