I had a look to the document and in principle it seems fine. I can' t say if the test cases are addressing correctly the corresponding requirements verification, but they seem well structured.
I have a couple of minor comments:
- on section 1.1 where Test Design are mentioned, but then I don't see them in the document, unless I have missed some part. We can always say that test designs are not mandatory, since they should just group test cases.
- on section 2.6 it is not explained the test naming convention
I think that all this information could be maintained in Jira or confluence, and then exported to a doc when ready, this make it easier to maintain an to get to the the final VCD.
I see that scripts are used in some case to run the tests. These should be baselined, tagged maybe, in order to have a fix reference, in case there will be multiple runs on different versions of the scripts.